Wednesday, December 21, 2011

How does Outliers connect to MY life?

            I have not read anything like Outliers by Malcolm Gladwell ever before in my life.  The way he intended to speak using "beauty in saying something clearly and simply” (299) was very interesting in the matter of fact that his mother had always encouraged him to express himself in that manner. Mr. Gladwell is very opinionated, and proves his opinions with facts.  Out of all of his opinions in this book, I can relate to some of the opinions that Mr. Gladwell has talked about. His opinions also made me think hard about if I’m an outlier or not!
            When your intelligence is at the level where it is ‘smart enough’, there will be more deciding factors in what makes you stand out even more.   “She keeps trying and trying, one approach after another.” (239) In this quote, Renee was being described. Renee is someone who was videotaped by Alan Schoenfeld.  She tried hard for 20 minutes using software on the computer to solve an algebra problem.  I believe I am like Renee; I am determined and can figure things out for myself. The fact that I can figure things out for myself leads me to believe I’m smart. Using this general level of smartness I set for myself, the thing that makes me stand out even more is my creativity.  A ‘divergence test’ is a test that the grader looks for are “the number and uniqueness of your responses.” (86-87) The divergence test, in a way, measures your creativity.  On page 86, Mr. Gladwell had listed two objects; a brick and a blanket.  He said to make a list of how many uses you could think of for it.  I did this for about 30 minutes.  Just for my uses of brick there had been over 17 uses.  One of my favorite uses that I had come up with for the brick was to be painting it yellow and pretending you’re in the Wizard of Oz. For use list of for the blanket there had been sixteen. My favorite from that list was probably that you can write on it in permanent marker and use it as a sign at a football game.  It would be a bad sign, but still work.  I pondered at this moment, and realized my creativity level is quite high.  Now thinking about it, I can name many times my creativity had impacted my life.  My first example is when I was in 4th grade and I entered two pictures for the Official Neopets Magazine.  In 5th grade I happened to flip to the front page of the art gallery of issue number 17, and saw that the two were on the bottom of the page. I had been published, excitement overflowed my brain!  I believed one of the pictures I had made had been the reason of its publication.  I had made it out of different colored construction paper, a permanent black marker, and glue. This gave the picture a 3D kind of look.  My entry to the magazine was unique, and I had not ever seen it done before.  Another example of my creativity is when in 8th grade I had painted my room with the idea in my mind I wanted to make a giant collage.  I painted one wall a dark blue (I wanted to paint it black, but my mom wouldn’t let me do it) and the others a purple color. Throughout the year I had obtained many posters and a few wall scrolls (a Japanese poster) that I put up on my walls. I printed a ton of black and white anime screenshots, manga pages, and art that I liked. I put a colored background on each one and put it up surrounding the bigger posters. This year, I added Christmas lights surrounding my room as kind of a light boarder.  My room is the most unique room I’ve ever been in.  My creativity has never seemed to not impress me, and therefore I believe I stand out a little bit more. 
            “Plane crashes are much more likely to be the result of an accumulation of minor difficulties and seemingly trivial malfunctions.” (183) All of my life, I have rode in many planes.  I’ve always been afraid of planes; I’ve been paranoid.  One day in February when I was 13, I was coming back to New York from a family vacation to Florida.  The flight had been sort of shaky, and the whole time I was freaking out. My anxiety was at a high, when we were getting close to New York and the fight attendants seemed to worry. I continued to freak out and trying not to cry. It was really bumpy, and a ton of people vomited. I thought we were going down for sure.  My mom, dad and brother all were scared to. But thankfully, the plane did not end up crashing.  Now that I think about it, I wonder if there was an accumulation of minor difficulties to cause the plane turbulence, and trouble.  At the time I had no idea what was happening.  “They take initiative. They pull their share of the load. They don’t wait for someone to direct them.” (220)  I wonder if certain communication or the first officer stepped up and helped the plane land safely at Albany Airport.  I’m very thankful for the successful steps that paved those pilots education to be able to fly a plane safe, and their great communication skills.
            “[T]hey also got a big head start, an opportunity that they neither deserved nor earned. And that opportunity played a critical role in their success.” (30) Mr. Gladwell is referring to hockey players in this quote, but it can also be applied to academics. I was born December 29th 1995, and the cutoff for school in New York is November 31st. My mom decided to wait a year before I was placed into kindergarten, therefore putting me at the older end of my peers.  I feel like this gave me an unfair advantage towards the other kids.  In the year I didn’t go to school, I’d work on drawing and learning my shapes.  I would be more mature, and yet learning the same material as them.  Right now I believe I am successful.  I have never had a final average under 90 yet, allowing me to keep my honors pass.  My art is more matured; I’ve had more time to work on it.  That being said, what other 10 year olds were picked to be in a magazine art gallery for their skills? I often wonder if my mom had not waited to place me into kindergarten -would I still be this successful?
            An outlier is defined as “something that is situated away from or classed differently from a main or related body.” (1) I believe I am an outlier, because of my creativity.  I am not only smart, but really creative as well.  If you look in my room you’ll notice the giant collage and the framed Neopets Magazine, opened on the page my art is in.  I almost had crashed on a plane, but thankfully, I am still alive because of the pilot’s communication.  Waiting to go to kindergarten placed me ahead of my peers in the subjects I most enjoyed as a 5 year old.  These few steps in my life truly helped me succeed and stand out!

Works Cited
Gladwell, Malcolm. Outliers: the Story of Success. New York: Little, Brown and, 2008. Print.
"Kindergarten Cut-Off Dates." Web. 21 Dec. 2011. <http://users.stargate.net/~cokids/kindergarten_cut-off_dates.htm>.

Monday, December 19, 2011

Perspective Poetry Prompt (APPLE)

Apple of Mine
By Alyssa Varsanyi

I look up and stare,
stare into the apple,
the apple that was placed upon the bed
earlier that morning.
I stare as if its the only thing I can do,
I stare to look away from the one thing in the world.
The one thing in the world that held me together.

I notice
The apple's shade of red
red turns into grey,
grey intro black,
I stare into the black of the apple,
Watching tears drop
from the my exhausted face.

I notice
The leaf from the apple
shrivels.
Shrivels as if it was in a stop motion film,
from it's shade of lively green
to a dark shade of grey,
until eventually the leaf turns to ash
and flies in the air.

What is with this?
This oddly colored apple
black and shriveled.
The coloring from my face is missing
as i fall to the floor
in the middle of thought
the emptyness
and darkness
can not be withstood.
The battle has been lost
and the apple
seems to be the worst

Sunday, December 18, 2011

Microfiction: He didn't look anything like she expected.

He didn't look anything like she expected.  His white face stared back at her from his casket. His eyes had been places down, he wore a suit and placed next to him was his guitar.  Tears rolled down her cheek.  It wasn’t supposed to happen like this. They were supposed to grow old together; they were supposed to have kids and a nice house with a white picket fence. She started sobbing. She put her hands over her face and memories flashed before her eyes.

It had been a year since they met.  They were in love. They had promised on that one night on top of the hill under the stars to always stay together.  They were young but they didn’t care.  They didn’t know much, but they knew they wanted to stay together forever. They could feel it in their veins.  He had sung her one of his songs, a song of love. Together they snuggled under the stars.  Another memory had come. 
As soon as she got the call that there had been a crash she dropped everything and jumped in her own car to get to the scene.  She couldn’t believe her eyes. She dropped to the floor and sat next to his body.  

“You can’t let… ruin… life… be strong…for me baby.” He had said choking out words as his eyes finally closed for the last time. His bloody, burned body lay on the grass next to the burning car. Her eyes burned from crying so much. She didn’t know what to do. The promise they made was broken. He wasn’t going to be able to be there anymore. 

So many days had passed since that day. She awakened from her flash back. The memories were overwhelming. She was in so much pain she couldn’t even stand anymore.  She fell on her knees as her mother came to help her get up. She told herself she would be strong, but she just couldn’t.  Her mom moved her to sit down.  All she wanted to do was sleep and get away from this nightmare.  Everything went black as she laid her head in her mother’s arms.

The next thing she knew, she was in bed and looked to her side.  She saw slicked back short brown hair. She reached for his hair. He turned around and his face was burned.  She screamed.

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She woke up into reality.  She had saw his hair again and started to shake. She started to cry again as he turned around. She closed her eyes; she was prepared for the worst.  She couldn’t take this ongoing inception.
“Baby what are you doing?” He said. She looked through a hole in her fingers.  His face was normal.  His death had been a dream. She hugged him and started crying.  It had been a nightmare inside a nightmare.
“What’s wrong?” He said.  She only smiled.
“I’m so glad that you’re alive. “ She replied.

Wednesday, December 14, 2011

TU Tuesday - Editorial

 Evaluate a speaker’s point of view, reasoning, and use of evidence and rhetoric, identifying any fallacious reasoning or exaggerated or distorted evidence.
http://www.timesunion.com/default/article/Ohio-bill-would-require-teaching-historical-texts-2399396.php
Editorial by Andy Brownfield

The article I read was about how in Ohio there is a bill proposed in which that high school students have "requirements to read the state and federal constitutions, the Declaration of Independence and other historical documents." The speaker in this article gives quotes to argue for both sides.  His voice doesn't really stand out because it's mostly a lot of quotes.  Mr. Brownfield had said "This year's proposal came on the heels of a tea party surge that has focused intensely on the U.S. Constitution" and I believe his statement is over exaggerated.  The proposal didn't 'come on the heels of a tea party surge.' One side supports, and one side doesn't. The Ohio Christians Allience wants this bill to be passed because they say the school doesn't do a good job of covering it; "information is filtered through summaries and analysis that give a flawed view." "He said he's also worried that teaching them in their original language could be an obstacle to some students."  (Mr. Brownfield was reffering to Phil Hayes, a teacher.) Phil Hayes seems to be not opposed to teaching it, but he's worried about how it will fit in with the schedule.  "Opponents object to the bill's failure to list the Bill of Rights, Emancipation Proclamation and other historical texts. Others say it will mean extra work and cost for school districts and teachers."  I agree that it will mean extra work and cost for school districts and teachers. I think this bill is stupid; why spend more money on stuff that does not have a lot of importance in real life skills?  If you were going to be made to read documents from the United States history, then wouldn't it have to be another class because there's so many things to learn? This bill doesn't cover every document and I agree with Phil Hayes that it would be hard to fit in. The bill was passed.  "If you ought to mandate anything, you ought to make it the teaching of American history"  I feel bad for the kids who have to learn it in it's original language. I can imagine it would be difficult.

My T-Shirt Vote

 I'd like to vote for the shirt that says "laughter is the best medicine ...besides medicine"  It has random blotches of green, blue, purple, orange and red.

If I won I'd like peanut butter cookies.

Wednesday, December 7, 2011

P = Pugs

 PUGS!!!!


Breed Description -  They are sensitive to the tone of a human's voices. They make a good watch dog.  They are always friendly and playful.They are very lively. They have the tenancy to drool.  They are in the breed group of "Toy."
Appearance/Size -  10-11 inches and 14-18 lbs.  Pugs are the colors of silver, apricot- fawn, and black.  
Diet -  Pugs have no sense of when to stop eating. People must moniter their food or it will lead to dog obesity. Puppy food should be given to puppies, while adult food to adult foods. 
Temperament - Very happy and cheerful. They can become jealous. They are good with children.  They are outgoing.
Shedding -  They have a fine, soft and short coat.  They do shed but their coat requires little grooming. 
Health/Allergies/Vaccines – They tend to be a healthy breed. The number one problem in pugs is that they're obese. People should clean their wrinkles on their face so they don't get infected.  They can have trouble breathing with their short face.  



Works Cited
2007. Photograph. By WickedDesigns. Web. 8 Dec. 2011. <http://www.fanpop.com/spots/pugs/images/239511/title/pug-photo>.
"American Kennel Club - Pug." American Kennel Club - Akc.org. Web. 08 Dec. 2011. <http://www.akc.org/breeds/pug/>.
"Pug Diet and Nutrition." Pugs | Pug | Pug Puppies. Web. 08 Dec. 2011. <http://www.officialpugguide.com/pug/pug-diet-and-nutrition>.
Pug Dog Club of America. Web. 08 Dec. 2011. <http://www.pugs.org/indexhealth.htm>.
"Pug Puppy & Pugs Dog Breed Information." Dogs & Puppies - Next Day Pets. Web. 08 Dec. 2011. <http://www.nextdaypets.com/directory/breeds/1100216/>.

    Monday, December 5, 2011

    Creativity Breeds Creativity

    *Notes*  I finally finished animating and subtitling this video on December 30th, 2009.  I believe I can re-do this and make it better.  My drawing and animation skills have improved a lot in a year. It gives me inspiration to redo it with more unique scenes.  I have other animations, but this is one of my original ones.  Everything in this came from my mind alone, except the actual lyric/ song/ lyric translation.  The images/scenes were inspired by the song.  I chose a Japanese song because I do enjoy Asian music and Youtube is less likely to take it off for copyright. 

    Sunday, December 4, 2011

    X-ray Poetry Prompt

    The Multi- Sided Boy 
    by Alyssa Varsanyi

    You have so many sides
    as if you were an onion
    as if you could peel off each layer of your personalitiy
    as if you were a food triangle pyramid 
    telling me which parts of you are good and bad


    Pulling off a layer,
    revealing something new
    My own brain spirals,
    as I see something new.


    Your mixed personalities,
    with all your different faces,
    sending me mixed singles
    about the human race


    How is it you can leave me there?
    With half finished sentences and a glare
    The next day your new layer appears,
    and a full paragraph is near


    Peel, peel, peel through your mind,
    and through your heart,
    until you have stopped upon something grand.

    Then talk to me:
    with the most pure,
    and fine,
    and special,
    layer you have.